Getting Creative

My injuries and illness may have curtailed my running recently but they’ve also given me the opportunity to try my hand at some other pastimes. I’ve amended the name of this blog to include nutrition, which allows me to include my cooking, baking and smoothie making activities. More recently I’ve completed a number of courses through the fantastic and free FutureLearn. which has over 67 courses starting in June 2016 alone.

I’ve completed two courses recently, a Glasgow University one on Robert Burns and an Open University one on Creative Writing. I loved both. The latter course was more interactive and I received a lot of positive feedback on my submissions. Enough to give me the enthusiasm to continue learning about Creative Writing. I’ve created a new blog dedicated to this entitled Prose and Poems. I’d love it if you could pop over there and let me know what you think but in the meantime here’s my final submission to the Open University course.

dramatic portrait of a little homeless boy

Held Back

My dreams, my plans, my future, my whole life smashed into a thousand pieces. The school’s decision to place me into a non-academic class had killed a twelve year old boy. My exam results were not good enough. Hanging around the local café with my pals every night hadn’t helped. All of us were facing vocational education. It didn’t bother any of them, but it bothered me.

I had tried to study, but it wasn’t easy. There was no lighting nor heating in the bedrooms, let alone a desk and chair. Whilst downstairs in the living room my siblings and parents were always arguing about something. The noise of them shouting and screaming at each other was even louder than the television. Often the quarrels would lead to violence. Either my brothers fighting with each other or my father exerting his authority, by using his 5’10 frame to beat my brothers or my mother. I sat under the stairs pretending to be invisible and doing my homework. But they could still see me.’Do you think that you’re better than us, you lazy shit?’ The question rotated between my brothers and my father but was always accompanied by a kick or a punch. No, I didn’t think I was better than them, but I was different.

I was the youngest of four brothers and, at four foot seven inches tall and weighing in at four stone eight pounds, I was by far the smallest. My teachers said I was intelligent and should make the most of my potential. My father didn’t care, he wanted me to be the same as my brothers. They were not academic. Most of their schooling didn’t suit them, but they liked working with their hands and enjoyed their craft classes. Three wooden fish sat on our mantelpiece, testimony to their skills. I had no wish to add to the tally.

I wanted to make something though. A future, away from this hell which masqueraded as life. An education would be my escape tunnel. Now it had collapsed, trapping me underground in a dark and claustrophobic world.

I walked out of the school gates in a trance and wandered for hour after hour until nightfall. I don’t know where I went, or how far I walked. Exhausted I reached the bleak council house where I slept. I found no solace in the darkness of my bedroom. My brothers lay sleeping, oblivious to my pain. My bullying siblings, my tormentors and now my mentors to be.

Exhausted, I crept under the old coat, my pauper’s duvet. Sharp rusty springs protruded from the mattress, like the teeth of a great white shark waiting to bite. I pulled the coat over my head lay motionless and cried myself to sleep.

As usual, I raised at 4 a.m to a brand new day. Every dawn should give us a fresh start, new challenges and new hope, but this morning a dark cloud greeted me.

David Mackie, the dairyman who hired me for the local farm, gave me much more than a job milking 120 Ayrshire cows every day. He gave me confidence and self-respect too. He treated me as a colleague, a friend, a young man. At 6’2 and 16 stone, David was a gentle giant. He was ten years younger than my dad, but more of a father figure than the fifty year old alcoholic who beat me with a leather belt.

David picked up on my low mood. The red puffy rings which had formed around my tear-stained eyes told a story. The usual cheery Stuart Henshaw replaced by a troubled twin. David did not question me about my mournful mood but during the next three hours we chatted until he understood the reason for my sullenness. He wanted to see me do well at school and encouraged me to meet the Head Master direct and make my case. ‘Stuart you are a smart lad with a bright future ahead of you, don’t throw it away. Tell him you want to study. Let him know how much education means to you. Beg for a second chance’.

A few hours later, I found myself in the corridor outside the Head’s Office. For ninety minutes, I sat there before being summoned into his office. As I entered the room the enormity of the situation hit me. I stood there alone, vulnerable and shaking. For an age, my lips refused to move but then nervously I uttered my words. Although I had rehearsed them in my mind, they still sounded foreign when spoke out loud. I appealed to him to give me a chance to prove myself.

‘I’m sorry, I should have done better. I’m capable of more, ask my teachers. Education means everything to me, if you give me another chance I won’t let you down, I’ll study harder than anyone else. I’ll be the perfect pupil. Please, I’m begging you’.

Mr Marshal listened to my plea and then mulled things over. The room filled with the deafening sound of silence. And then slowly he began to speak ‘the decision cannot be reversed’.

A knife stabbed me in my heart, my head drooped forward, my legs gave way. I was sinking, drowning. But then I heard his voice continue. He was throwing me a lifeline. I resurfaced gasping for air, but still alive. He towered over me, his dark brown eyes, magnified by his thick spectacles, peered down at me. His manicured moustache moved up and down. ‘I will speak to your teachers and consider the options. Come back in two days’. His words were few, but they meant a lot. They gave me hope.

After the longest forty-eight hours of my short life, I was back standing in front of his gigantic oak table. At the other end sat Mr Marshal, his grey suit remained in the huge leather chair.

I listened in silence as his commanding voice announced my sentence. He wouldn’t allow me to transfer into the academic class, but I could repeat the second year. On one condition, I would need to place in the top six of the class. I accepted, without hesitation. We had a deal.

For the next ten months, I spent every evening studying in the town library. My parents sat next door in the local pub, drinking their lives away. They didn’t know where I was and cared even less. I wasn’t bitter, I appreciated that life couldn’t have been easy for them, bringing up four children with little money. The horrors of World War II, never spoken but always in their minds. They had fought for a better future but did they get one?

I also fought for a better future. I sacrificed my childhood and lost my friends. My new class mates wondered what I was doing in their class. ‘Why is he being kept back, is he a retard?’ I overheard them whisper.

Life was tough. At times, I struggled, but I persevered. I worked hard and got the results. My exams went better than I could have hoped for. I kept my part of the deal and finished in the top six. I placed first in the class.

On the day of the prize giving ceremony, I’m sure Mr Marshal winked as he presented me with my diploma and a £25 book token. I should have been happy, but I didn’t belong here. I stood out like one of the many pimples on my adolescent face. The other prize winners looked so smart, in their pressed school uniforms and shiny shoes. Their family and loved ones surrounded them. Smiling and sharing in their success

I stood beside the door, dressed in faded denim jeans, a red tartan shirt and scuffed trainers. There was no one there to congratulate me, or to wipe away my tears.

My Prose and Poems can be viewed here .https://iangoudieproseandpoems.wordpress.com

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